This is my first article for Wikipedia, so be mindful of that before you say hurtful things about poor grammar and/or spelling. That said, critisisms are welcome.
The content appears fine (if lacking in both his UK appearances, and a brief is needed on his Matrix Affinity, which is what set him apart.) the language is too informal/not detached enough for Wiki standards though. Also, calling US#75 'The Unicron Battle' is unnecessarily confusing, because the term has nother connotations in continuity.[User:Derik]
Truth be told, I don't have the issue with the Unicron Battle in it (I only have two of the Titan Book reproductions), so I wasn't sure what number it was. Let alone the actual title of the story, so I just went with something generic enough to tell when it happened.
But thanks for the comments.
revisions[]
I took your comments to heart and rewrote a heavy portion of the article. It's not quite Barns & Noble-Quality, but now it doesn't sound so much like the insane ramblings of a Decepticon fanboy.
Also, I discovered that it helps if you actually reread the comics in question before you set out to do something like this. The more you know, eh?
As for the UK comics thing, I honestly had no idea. As far as I was concerned, he was created for the Matrix Quest, spent a good chunk of time deceased, then failed to kill Unicron. So any amount of lore regarding the T-Man is outside my knowledge.
Megadeath?[]
The article is already written -- http://transformers.wikia.com/wiki/Megadeath -- and just needs to be fitted into the framework the author's got here... 82.45.64.176 17:08, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
Fiction order?[]
Shouldn't the Armada section come before IDW, since it came out before IDW's take? --M Sipher 19:37, 17 May 2008 (UTC)