Now it would be A teeny tiny Himalayan rock salted dark yeah it will be a bit dark but they would use the same designs as a rescue bots academy this time the decepticons Will take the war to Gryphon rock and with past years as the rescue bots start fires and save the day they will do more they will wheeled blasters and swords And this time Optimus prime will not be somewhere else fighting evil this time he will join the rescue bots on griffin rock fighting decepticons And A few old autobot friends will join the fight Like bumblebee Ironhide ratchet wheel jack jazz Grimlock Arcee Hot rod Sentinel prime Who in this series will be heat waves brother and The leader of the autobot Academy and leader of autobot city Optimus prime’s brother ultra Magnus and a whole lot of stuff could happen Megatron would revive Dr. morocco’s dead robot body and Pricilla would be possessed by Starscream in reference to Transformers beast wars and Transformers kiss players only this time Starscream would be Astro projecting his soul into Pricilla breaking Madeline pinch out of jail to rebuild thunder cracker Skywarp acid storm sun storm and slipstream blitz wing sound wave and shockwave and waspinater would be the same like an animated three different personalities and the power to possess fire and ice and both the autobots and Decepticons will be finding the legendary titans fortress maximus omega supreme and metroplex which will end on a battle between Optimus prime and Megatron on top of griffin rock Megatron gets plugged into lava only to return in the next season as Galvatron who would be similar to his G1 counterpart in color and design yes it would be the return of Lugnut The constructicons bulkhead who will be boulders brother Prowell the rescue recruits only this time they can combine into rescue master and boy whirl The auto bot brothers sideburn X Bron and Prowell Dinobot and inferno Where they will be trying to find the legendary all spark with the end being both morocco’s and Galvatrons defeat. the auto bots decide to stay on her and protect its people

Now before you say this is fanfiction it is not so please don’t call this fanfiction

Over all I think it was better than Siege. Actually, I think it was WAY BETTER than siege. This time I'll start with the negative because there is some stuff that wasn't that good.

• Megatron and Optimus' relationship still needs work: Especially on the Megatron side. At first when Megatron and Optimus were both underground in the space station I thought Megatron could be potentially on a path for redemption. But in the very next scene Megatron is all like he once again hates Optimus and just wants to murder him.

• Galvatron felt shoehorned in to set up Unicron: That's all I have to say about that.

• Sky Lynx felt underused: I liked the way Sky Lynx was introduced and I thought he was going to be an excellent almost maybe mentor character to Optimus Prime, and his sacrifice didn't feel earned enough as it should've.

• Not enough of Skytread: I liked the idea of Decepticons facing the moral ambiguities of their actions, but Skytread, probably the biggest follower of this wasn't utilized nearly enough as I think he should have.

The Positive:

• Shockwave: Holy crap is this a better Shockwave than any we've gotten so far. Easily my favourite Shockwave since IDW. I love how they brought kinda these different elements from all the other great Shockwaves. (E.G. prime's logic, IDW remorselessness). I love how even though he is "loyal" to Megatron he still is ruthless and ambitious. And I absolutely loved his final fight with Elita.

• Megatron and Starscream's relationship was close to perfection: Starscream has finally come on into his full on treacherous minion mode. We saw it start to bloom a little bit in Siege and it has finally come through. Megatron also just refusing to kill Starscream even though he is so clearly a liability to the Decepticons was honestly hilarious.

• Orion is becoming Optimus (literally): Optimus was WAY better here than he was last time in siege. He is truly actually learning and becoming the leader that we all have come to know and love. He still has a little anger issues, and I'm not a huge fan of his deep angry voice, but I think he was over all better.

• Doubledealer, Deseeus and Skorponok were welcome additions: Skorponok was surprisingly a deep character while still being this kinda mini-boss that existed throughout the season. Doubledealer helped a great deal whith showing what the universe outside of Cybertron is like and while I think the Coneheads were underused, Doubledealers team were excellent members of the supporting cast. Deseeus was probably the most give and take in a matter of speaking for me. While on the one hand I think we should have had more of the other four heads, the one we got stuck with was ruthless, intimidating, and on the rare occasion, terrifying.

• Jake Foushee continues to impress me: I think he is the potential next Optimus, and while this will be a controversal statement I think he's doing a better job than Peter Cullen would have done, FOR THIS SCRIPT!!!! I don't think Jake Foushee should replace Peter Cullen as the next Optimus at all, but I think he does an excellent job as a younger version of Prime.

• Voicework has gotten somewhat better: While Ironhide's voice does still bother me, I did kinda get used to it. Jason Marnocha is still a great Megs, as is Frank Todaro as Starscream, and Bill Rogers as Wheeljack. Lindsay Rousseau as Elita has grown on me, as has Shockwave's voice which does sound a little different from last time. I don't like Soundwave's though.

• The Action is much more fluid and entertaining: Almost every fight scene was a step up from Siege's and while I still think they should be incorporating more vehicle combat into the fight scenes, I do think they were s big step up.

Finally I plan on getting Transformers Requiem done tonight so stay tuned tomorrow.

I’ve found that it gets better the more you watch. I’m actually surprised that on a second viewing I’ve really started to like Prime in it. I think the reason is because while his name is Optimus Prime, he’s not Optimus Prime yet, to me he’s still Orion Pax. I still have a problem with Iron Hide, Hound, and Shockwave’s voices, but I can get over it. I also found myself liking Impactor’s story a lot more this time around.

All in all, from a second viewing, it’s better than I thought the first time around.

I should be finished the first five chapters of TF Requiem I hope by the end of December or early January.

My main human characters:

Chris Burke

Christopher Burke

Chris is a sarcastic and good natured teen who’s parents show him a tough but meaningful love.

Height: 5’8”

Age: 16

Matt Gonzales

Matthew Gonzales

Matt is a humorous and unserious teen who’s parents don’t care what he does as long as he enjoys it.

Height: 5’9”

Age: 16

Stace Davidson

Stacey Davidson

Stace is a street smart and tough teen who doesn’t have the best home life.

Siblings: Sid Gretchen (step brother)

Height: 5’7”

Age: 16

Agent Hatcher

Markus Hatcher

Hatcher is the sleazy and annoying government agent assigned to the Autobots.

Height: 6’5”

Age: 53

There are a few oddballs here but I think it works.

Megatron

• Megatron is a cunning and ruthless leader of the Decepticons. He has some anger issues when things don’t go his way.

• Weapons: Fusion Cannon on the right arm, Wrist Blade on the right arm, and a Chain-and-Mace

• Cybertronian Tank

Starscream

• Starscream is the cowardly second in command. He is out for himself and believes he should lead.

• Weapons: Blaster Rifle on each arm, Missile on each arm, and a Glaive

• F-15 Eagle

Soundwave

• Soundwave is the silent communications officer. He is extremely loyal to Megatron.

• Weapons: Minigun on the right shoulder, Tentacles extend from his gut and has three minions, Rumble, Ravage, and Laserbeak

• Land Rover Range Rover

Knock Out

• Knock Out is the chief medic of the Decepticons. He is very fond of his looks and alt-mode.

• Weapons: Drill, Saw

• Lamborghini Aventador

Shockwave

• Shockwave is a scientist he is blindingly loyal to the Decepticon cause. His only true master is logic.

• Weapons: Left arm is an Atom Cannon

• Cybertronian Tank

Lugnut

• Lugnut is the dumb muscle. Like Soundwave he too is insanely loyal and would lay down his life for Megatron.

• Weapons: Rocket Launcher on each arm

• B-2 Spirit

Flatline

• Flatline is the large and imposing field medic of the Decepticons.

• Weapons: War Hammer

• Freightliner Cascadia

Smolder

• Smolder has a lot of grudges, and to that end, pyrotechnics are the only thing that put his mind at ease.

• Weapons: Flamethrower with two Miniguns on the sides, Hand Axes

• Ford F-150 Fire and Rescue

Barricade

• Barricade is the over confident scout of the Decepticon, and follows his morals of punish and enslave.

• Weapons: Heavy Pistol, Arm Minigun

• Saleen Mustang Police Car

Stinger

• Stinger is the silent warrior of the Decepticons and is a very skilled fighter.

• Weapons: Assault Blaster

• Pagani Huayra

@Jazzjaytimtailsmyfavs inspired me to post my Autobot force that I’m using for my fanfiction on quotev.

Optimus Prime

• Optimus Prime is the heroic and wise leader of the Autobots

• Ion Rifle

• Peterbilt 379

Ratchet

• Ratchet is the grumpy old medical officer of the Autobots

• Welder, Plasma Pistol

• Ford E-350 Ambulance

Bumblebee

• Bumblebee is the young but experienced scout of the Autobots.

• Assault Blaster

• Chevrolet Camaro

Iron Hide

• Iron Hide is the experienced war veteran of the Autobots and 2nd-in-Command.

• Assault Cannons on arms, and Heavy Assault Blaster

• GMC Topkick

Prowl

• Prowl is the arrogant combat analyst of the Autobots.

• Missiles on shoulders, and Heavy Assault Blaster

• Dodge Charger Police Car

Perceptor

• Perceptor is the eccentric science officer of the Autobots.

• Charge Rifle

• Jeep Renegade

Trail Breaker

• Trail Breaker is the cheerful warrior of the Autobots.

• Left Hand Blaster, Right Shoulder Blaster, and a Shield Generator on left shoulder.

• Nissan Xterra

Crosshairs

• Crosshairs is the cocky sniper of the Autobots.

• Sniper Rifle, and Plasma SMGs

• Corvette Stingray

Arcee

• Arcee is the no-nonsense warrior of the Autobots.

• Arm Blades, and Ion Pistols

• Kawasaki Ninja

Because the derp in Galvatron’s alt-mode is real.