User talk:203.158.52.230

Your entire contribution to the Action Masters article was written more like a message board post, expressing personal opinions in first person. Both points go against our Style guide. (See especially parts 5 and 16.) You also took five tries to do it, most of them being minor adjustments. If you need to tweak your edit, use the Show Preview button before saving it.--Apcog 04:55, 8 September 2008 (UTC)